Wednesday 18 September 2019

Day.1flying books

Nervously, the vicious little girl read her book very very anxiously. viciously she gasped because of the slight creep of the door she was terrified the darker and darker the night got the weirder and weirder it got This was not an ordinary library. Suddenly the sound of one million exploding suns emerged in her ear drum and soon the book she was reading floated in the air like an angel.Worried and terrified the little girl screamed her loudest scream it was louder than the kin of the jungle.                     Image result for the greatest library
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  1. Nicole Mills19 September 2019 at 07:38

    Hi Anjola. Well done on using an -ly to begin your writing. Why was the girl vicious? Could you include some sound words to describe the sound of the door creeping? I really liked the sentence where you described the suns exploding and the book floating in the air. Remember to read your writing and check that it makes sense :-) Great work, Anjola.

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